The Courtesy of Blades

Canon · 3,365 words

Prompt
"So if you win the duel, you get to take her on a date." They both nodded. "And if she wins the duel, she gets to take you on a date." They both nodded. "So why don't you both just... Skip that and go on a date?" They both glared.
Cover art for The Courtesy of Blades

Fiora Halwick set her travel case beneath the spectator rail, where it looked like an accusation.

The buckles were fastened. Her teaching coats were rolled around two pairs of boots. At dawn, a hired cart would carry her upriver to East Weir and the yard that had trusted her with its head instructor’s keys. Everything about the case said settled. Everything about Fiora standing in the Lacebridge civic blade yard in a padded practice coat said otherwise.

Across the strip, Jasper Renlow tightened his throat guard. He caught her watching and lifted his chin in question.

Fiora lifted hers back. If he wanted reassurance, he could earn it point by point.

Between them, Quade inspected the flex of one chalk-edged blade, then the other. Evening light slanted through the open side of the yard and turned the chalk dust pale gold. Beyond the wall came the river’s slap against pilings and the more persuasive hiss of onions hitting hot iron at the supper stalls.

Quade sighted along Fiora’s blunt blade. “No cracks. Edge freshly chalked. Eye guards down when I call ready. Marks count only on the dark torso and upper-arm panels. Head, throat, hands, and joints are out. Either of you may halt or surrender. I may halt you whether you like it or not.”

“You’ve been waiting years to say that to us,” Jasper said.

“I’ve been saying it to you for years. Tonight I have witnesses.” Quade handed the blade to Fiora. “First to three. Clear touches are mine to judge. If you both land and I cannot see the order, you call your own truth. Understood?”

“Understood,” Fiora and Jasper said together.

That earned a ripple of amusement from behind the rail. Fiora did not look toward it. The bronze trial badge pinned inside her case had been won in this same strip, three points to two. For six months, people had admired it by asking whether Jasper had let her have the last touch.

Quade opened the yard ledger. “Now the personal stake. So if you win the duel, you get to take her on a date.”

They both nodded.

“And if she wins the duel, she gets to take you on a date.”

They both nodded.

Quade looked from one of them to the other. “So why don’t you both just… skip that and go on a date?”

They both glared.

Quade waited a beat. “Yes, very frightening. For the record, take means the winner gets the first invitation and chooses the place. The loser may decline. The winner may decide not to ask. Nobody owes anyone a hand, a kiss, a change of town, a second evening, or even dessert. This is a courtesy-bout stake, not custody. Do you each enter freely?”

“Yes,” Jasper said.

“Yes,” Fiora said.

“Do you understand that this entire business could have been accomplished with two sentences and clean shirts?”

“Ready, Quade,” Fiora said.

Jasper lowered his eye guard. “Very ready.”

Their mutual glare had been agreement of a kind. The absurdity was admitted. The necessity was not. Fiora raised her blade and stepped onto the strip.


Jasper saluted with the crisp economy that made him infuriating on patrol and worse in a fencing yard. He had the sort of balance that never looked hurried, even when Fiora knew perfectly well she had him worried.

She intended to worry him quickly.

“Ready,” Quade called. “Fence.”

Fiora advanced behind two small testing cuts. Jasper yielded half a step, blade quiet, his gaze fixed through the guard on the center of her coat. She pressed. His retreat put him exactly where she wanted him: weight shifting back, right side open, attention dragged low.

She snapped her blade high.

Jasper was already there.

His parry turned her familiar feint aside. Before she could recover, his blade flexed against the padded panel of her upper arm and sprang away, leaving one clean white bar.

“Halt.” Quade stepped between their lines before either could continue. He examined the mark. “Touch, Jasper. One to nothing.”

The yard murmured.

Fiora stared at the chalk on her sleeve. Jasper had known the attack. Not guessed—known. He had remembered the hitch of her shoulder, or the fraction by which she shortened her second step, and he had trained an answer precise enough to make the point look simple.

It was deeply annoying.

It was also the first thing she had wanted from him all evening.

Jasper returned to his mark without smiling. “You still announce the high line with your left eyebrow.”

“My eyebrow is a master of deception.”

“It told me everything.”

“Then do keep listening.”

Quade checked the chalk edge, backed away, and called them on.

Fiora gave Jasper the same two testing cuts. This time his mouth twitched. He settled to meet the high feint again.

She sank instead.

The new pivot had been born from three weeks of preparing lessons for East Weir, where the shortest practice strip was hemmed in by two inconvenient pillars. Fiora folded low without surrendering her balance, turned beneath Jasper’s parry, and came up past his outside shoulder. Her chalk edge kissed the dark panel over his ribs.

Quade’s “Halt” arrived on the same breath as Jasper’s startled laugh.

The mark was a bright crescent.

“Touch, Fiora. One to one.”

Jasper looked down at it, then across at her. There was no embarrassment in his face, only sharp interest. “That’s new.”

“East Weir.”

“You developed it for the new yard?”

“I developed it because the new yard has pillars, and pillars refuse to adjust their style for my convenience.”

“I always said you should train with more reasonable opponents.”

“You have never been evidence for that argument.”

This time he did smile, quick and unwilling and much too handsome. Fiora’s heart made a tactical error. She covered it by returning to her mark.

One to one. He knew her, but not all of her. She could work with that.


On the next call, Jasper came forward.

The lazy-looking patience vanished from his feet. He drove Fiora down the strip with compact attacks that made her give ground honestly. Chalk whispered once past her shoulder without touching. She caught his next blade and turned it, but he was already angling for her ribs.

He was not easing against her. The realization warmed something under her breastbone at the least convenient possible time.

Fiora broke his rhythm with a stop, then another. Jasper adjusted. She let him. On his third advance she offered the opening he had been trying to create, a sliver of dark panel under her arm.

He took it.

Her blade was waiting on the line he abandoned.

She rotated out, struck his upper-arm panel with a flat white line, and was already clear when Quade called halt.

“Touch, Fiora. Two to one.”

The cheer behind the rail came fast enough to lift the rafters. Fiora stepped back, breathless and grinning despite herself.

Jasper rubbed a thumb near the mark, careful not to smear it. “A trap.”

“A lesson plan.”

“Your pupils are doomed.”

“My pupils will learn.”

“I am learning.” His gaze held hers. “That’s the trouble.”

It would have been easier if he had sounded flirtatious. He sounded sincere.

Then a voice behind the rail said, not quite softly enough, “Still easing off, then.”

The grin left Fiora’s face.

Quade turned toward the onlookers. “The next person who offers an unofficial judgment may enjoy the rest of the bout from the street.”

Silence followed, but the words had found the old bruise.

Still easing off. Still giving her room. Still letting the ambitious assistant instructor leave town with a badge she had not properly earned. She could already hear the story traveling upriver ahead of her: Jasper had indulged her again, out of affection this time, and East Weir had appointed the beneficiary of his gallantry.

Jasper returned to his mark. His shoulders were loose, his attention on her, as if the rail did not exist.

“You’re not going to answer that?” Fiora asked.

“I can argue with the rail,” he said, “or I can fence you. Which do you want?”

“I want your best.”

“You have it.”

Quade studied them. “Do either of you need a halt?”

“No,” Fiora said.

“No,” Jasper echoed.

“Then leave the rail outside the rail. Ready. Fence.”

Fiora attacked before the last word had settled.

Anger lent speed and stole judgment. Her first advance forced Jasper back; her second beat his blade wide. She saw the opening at his ribs and chased it with the fierce satisfaction of a door flying open.

It was too wide.

Jasper dropped his point under hers, turned, and let her own forward drive carry her onto the flex of his blade. Chalk struck squarely across her rib panel. The padded coat absorbed the touch with a firm thump.

“Halt!” Quade was already moving between them, one arm extended until both blades were safely down. His eyes went from Fiora’s panel to Jasper’s edge. “Clean touch. Jasper. Two to two.”

Fiora’s lungs objected to every part of the situation.

Jasper did not apologize. He did not soften the point by calling it luck or looking ashamed of the mark. He only waited while she found her breath.

She had asked for his best. He had respected her enough to make the request cost something.

“That,” she said, “was obnoxiously clean.”

“Your eyebrow told me nothing.”

“It was distracted by your personality.”

Quade pinched the bridge of his nose. “Mandatory pause. Re-chalk. Water. Try not to court each other into heatstroke.”


Fiora pushed up her eye guard. The evening air cooled the sweat at her temples. Across the strip, Jasper did the same.

Quade ran a practiced hand along each blade for damage, then worked fresh chalk over their edges. “Two to two. Final point decides. Before it does: hands?”

“Sound,” Fiora said.

“Sound,” Jasper said.

“Vision?”

“Clear.”

“Clear.”

Quade gave them water and moved several paces away. Close enough to intervene, far enough to offer privacy that fooled no one in a yard full of listeners.

Fiora drank, then stared at the old chalk on Jasper’s arm. “At the trial,” she said, “did I land first?”

Jasper lowered his cup. “Yes.”

The answer came without decoration. That almost made her angrier.

“Then why did you never say so afterward?”

“I called your touch in front of Quade and half this yard.”

“And when they said you gave it to me?”

“I thought the call was the answer.” Jasper looked toward the strip rather than the rail. “I was wrong. I should have said it again when the story changed. I should have said it every time someone made my honesty into your humiliation.”

Fiora had prepared for denial, chivalry, or some noble nonsense about wanting her to leave with the badge. An admission fitted nowhere in her defenses.

“If I simply went to supper with you,” she said, “they would call that proof. They would say you wanted me, so you spared me. And I wouldn’t know which version you believed. I would sit across a table wondering whether you saw me or someone you had to be gentle with.”

Jasper met her eyes. “I do want you.”

Her fingers tightened around the cup.

“I also wanted to win that trial,” he continued. “You touched first. Both are true.”

“And tonight?”

“Tonight I want to win. If I do, I get to ask one question and choose where we eat. You can say no. You leave for East Weir at dawn. I have no claim on that, or on a second supper, or on any day after tonight.” His expression shifted, not quite a smile. “Though I reserve the right to be intolerably hopeful.”

It was, Fiora thought, remarkably unfair to become more attractive while renouncing all rights to her.

Quade returned and offered Fiora her blade hilt-first. “You may agree to a draw. You may surrender. You may continue. Separately, please, so neither of you can hide inside the other’s answer. Fiora?”

The easy refuge waited. A draw would leave her badge technically untouched and her doubt perfectly preserved.

She took the blade. “Continue.”

Quade turned. “Jasper?”

Jasper took his. “Continue.”

Fiora lowered her eye guard. The truth of the old match could no longer be proved by winning this one. It could only be tested by what they did when the truth hurt.


They returned to their marks with two white scores on each coat.

Fiora heard the crowd settle behind the rail. She heard the river and the supper fires and the faint clink of the buckle on her waiting travel case. The world had become offensively full of things that would continue after the next touch.

Quade raised one hand. “Ready.”

Fiora set her feet.

Jasper’s blade hovered on the line that had defeated her high feint at the opening. But his weight had shifted a degree lower. He was preparing for the East Weir pivot now.

Good.

“Fence.”

Neither moved.

Jasper’s eyebrows rose behind his guard.

“Mine say nothing,” Fiora told him.

“They say you intend something unkind.”

“That’s not prediction. That’s experience.”

He advanced.

The last exchange began almost quietly: blade to blade, a light scrape, two measured steps. Jasper tested her outside line. Fiora gave him no answer. He pressed again, quicker, and she turned the attack without taking the opening that followed.

He knew her patience was borrowed. She knew his was a weapon.

Jasper changed pace. Fiora retreated once, twice, until the end mark brushed beneath her heel. He expected her to spring high rather than be crowded off the strip. She saw it in the angle of his guard, the answer waiting where it had waited for her first attack.

So she began the new pivot.

She dropped her center. Jasper adjusted at once, blade falling to catch the low turn that had scored against his ribs. Fiora let the motion carry halfway—then drove upward, unwinding the pivot into the old high attack.

Surprise flashed across his face.

Not enough surprise.

Jasper recovered with brutal neatness. His low parry swept up as Fiora’s point cut toward his upper arm. Their shoulders crossed. For one compressed instant, his body blocked Quade’s view of both target panels.

Two chalked blades flexed.

Quade called halt.

Fiora froze with Jasper so close she could hear the catch in his breath. Her blade rested against his upper-arm panel. His rested against the dark padding over her ribs.

To the rail, the touches had been one sound.

To Quade, hidden by their crossing bodies, they had been one motion.

To Fiora, they had not.

She had felt Jasper’s blade bow against her coat. She had seen white chalk bloom at the lower edge of her vision. Half a beat later, her own edge had drawn its line across his arm.

Jasper eased his blade away but said nothing. He looked at her, waiting.

Six months earlier, in this strip, he had stood where she stood. He had owned a fraction of knowledge that could cost him the match, and he had spoken it. Courtesy, Fiora understood at last, was not making the world painless for someone. It was trusting them with the truth and trusting that they could bear what came next.

She could say she did not know. Quade would order the point refenced. She might win. The badge in her case might feel defended for an hour, perhaps even a week.

And every time she looked at it, she would know what she had withheld.

“Jasper’s touch landed first,” Fiora said.

The words passed through the yard with more force than a shout.

Jasper glanced once at the white mark on her ribs. He could have disputed her. He could have performed generosity and handed the point back until neither of them knew what anything meant.

Instead he nodded. “My touch first.”

Quade inspected both marks. He looked at Fiora, giving her room to correct or withdraw the call.

She held his gaze. “The point is Jasper’s.”

Quade straightened. “Touch, Jasper. Match to Jasper, three to two.”

For a moment no one behind the rail spoke. Then the applause came, less like a victory roar than a release of breath.

Fiora lifted her guard. Jasper did the same. He was smiling, but not as a man who had been awarded her company. He looked as she must have looked at the old trial: astonished, relieved, and fiercely proud of the person who had beaten him to the truth.

They saluted.

Quade carried the ledger to the rail and wrote the result in a firm hand: Jasper, three; Fiora, two. Beneath the notation, he added the final touch as self-called by Fiora. The old trial remained in its own place in the book: Fiora, three; Jasper, two, with Jasper’s call beside it.

Quade studied the two entries. “I withdraw my objection to the rematch.”

“Thank you,” Fiora said.

“I maintain every objection to your methods of conversation.”

“Also fair,” Jasper said.


The onlookers drifted toward the supper stalls, already arguing cheerfully about the final exchange. Quade made Fiora and Jasper return their blades, remove their guards, and submit to one last inspection before he would let either of them near food.

“No damage except to judgment,” he pronounced.

“Whose?” Fiora asked.

“Mine, for officiating.” Quade shut the ledger. “The match is recorded. What happens now is not.”

He walked away with enough determination to prove he was not about to arrange the rest for them.

Fiora knelt by her travel case and checked the nearest buckle. Still fastened. The cart would still come at dawn. East Weir’s yard would still be hers to lead. Losing had altered none of that.

Jasper stopped beside her. The chalk marks on his coat made him look like a particularly elegant piece of disputed arithmetic.

“The bout is over,” he said. “Your answer belongs to you.”

Fiora stood.

He took a breath. This, apparently, frightened him more than facing her blade. The discovery was so charming she almost rescued him, then decided equality required letting him suffer properly.

“Fiora Halwick,” Jasper said, “would you have supper with me at the riverside stalls tonight? One supper. I choose the place; you choose whether to come. You leave for East Weir at dawn either way.”

There it was: no ritual left to speak for him, no point pretending the question was anything but a hope placed carefully in her hands.

“Yes,” Fiora said. “Because I want to.”

His whole face changed.

“You may choose the stall,” she added, “but if you choose the one that burns the onions, I reserve the right to regret my consent.”

“Continued consent was explicitly covered.”

“Good. You were listening.”

They left the yard in their chalk-marked practice coats, Fiora carrying the travel case and Jasper carrying both guards. At the riverside, canvas awnings snapped above iron cooking plates. Warm bread steamed in baskets. The lamps along the pilings laid wavering paths across the dark water.

Jasper selected a stall where the onions were merely browned. He bought two folded breads full of vegetables and sharp cheese, then waited until Fiora had chosen a bench before sitting beside her.

The date began with her stealing one of his crispest onions.

“When may I visit East Weir?” he asked.

Fiora chewed thoughtfully. She could picture the new yard’s narrow strip, the awkward pillars, the rack waiting to be filled. She could picture herself at its center in the head instructor’s coat she had earned. Jasper belonged nowhere in that picture unless invited, which made room for wanting him there.

“When you’ve devised a respectable counter to my pivot,” she said.

“I countered it.”

“Eventually. After it scored.”

“Then I may need a rematch.”

“You may need several.” Fiora raised her supper in salute. “Come prepared to lose three to two.”

Jasper touched his folded bread to hers with grave courtesy. “I’ll come prepared to call what lands first.”

Fiora smiled and took another bite. Dawn would carry her east. Tonight, beside the river, neither of them asked it to wait.